2007 Practice 1
Zhang Nan Xi, 2006 Study the art elements in the picture above. You may use the links at the side to revise these elements and principles before you start.
Elements of art
*Lines
*Dots
*Colour
*Shape
Elements of art
*Lines
*Dots
*Colour
*Shape
Write a review of this picture. Remember to include the four step approach in your writing - describe, analyse, interpretate, evaluate. Best 3 entries each term per level wins a prize!
posted by WestGrovePrimarySchool @ 8:13 AM
408 comments
408 Comments:
this is an amazing picture.the picture is full with bright colours.the butterfly looks very
real.i am still not sure what is
that red curved thingy.the building
looks like its bending down,i can imagine i am inside the picture.
this is an amazing picture.the picture is full with bright colours.the butterfly looks very
real.i am still not sure what is
that red curved thingy.the building
looks like its bending down,i can imagine i am inside the picture.
SAMUEL 3H
Your painting looks very nice.The building is a bright green and the butterflies look real.The rainbow is brilliant red.The roof of the building is red too.
From: Sirhan Class:3H
From:Iris Neo Chu Yun (3H)(16)
The picture is very beautifully done.The colours are bright.There are two butterflies flying in the sky.The flat has lines on it.I enjoy looking at it.
This pictures have a lot of different bright colour.This picture have some curly and stright lines.The shape is surrounded by different colours.This picture have three butterflies with bright colours.
I like this picture.the colour of the butterfly's colour is the kind of real butterfly's colour. The arc drawn on the picture of the shape is very beautiful and special. The line of the house and the window are very straight. I think the lines of the house and the window are specially drawn. The dots of the sun shines are very beautifully drawn.
The picture is nice.I wonder why the butterflies are upside down?The colour of the building are bright.The cloud are white in the inside.The building is colourful and attractive.Why is the sun bright orange but i can feel the heat in my body.Comment by md adam ihsan boon jia sheng
The butterflies is very colourful. The house is tall.
The sun is round.
I can see beautiful colours,curved lines and straight lines.3 beautiful butterflies are fluttering by in the crystal clear skies.
Nicholas toh wei hao 3h (40)
I can see beautiful colours, straight lines and curved lines.
This picture has many beautiful patterns and the skies are pink as it is my favourite colour. There are three pretty butterflies. The bridge has red patterns as it is my mother's favourite colour. The HDB flat has a red top roof, green bricks and pink and orange windows.
This is a great picture that I comment.
Nur Safiqah Bte Abdul Rahim (3H)
The picture have a lot of shapes a sizes.The shape comes with different shapes. there are three butterflies with brigh colour.
Fong Xue Ying Rachael, Class 3h,
The building is very colourful.The butterflies are beautiful.The windows look very nice but I do not know what is that red curvy thing. I wish I could paint like this. Le Cong & Abigail
The painting is beautifully done. I can see many bright colours that he has use.There are also many different shapes like, traiangle and rectangle. I like the butterflies the best! They are very pretty.
I like this picture.the colour of the butterfly's colour is the kind of real butterfly's colour. The arc drawn on the picture of the shape is very beautiful and special. The line of the house and the window are very straight. I think the lines of the house and the window are specially drawn. The dots of the sun shines are very beautifully drawn.
BY:CHUA YI LIN
PRIMARY:3
CLASS:3H
I like this picture.the colour of the butterfly's colour is the kind of real butterfly's colour. The arc drawn on the picture of the shape is very beautiful and special. The line of the house and the window are very straight. I think the lines of the house and the window are specially drawn. The dots of the sun shines are very beautifully drawn.
BY:CHUA YI LIN
PRIMARY:3
CLASS:3H
The picture is colourful and it is attractive for expedition,but why is the black butterfly upside down.What is the reddish thing.The clouds and sun are beautiful and the building is colourful.
From:Pan Jia Le
It is a beautiful picture.There are three butterflies.There are lines on the building and windows.There are clouds.I feel happy as it is nice.
The picture is beautiful.The lin
es are not stright.The colours are bright.The butterflies are cute.The slide is dotted nicely.
By:Ling Wei En
Bai Sin Yeou(3)3H
This is an amazing picture.I can see a circle that form a sun,some squares that form some windows,a retangle block,a triangle roof, the lines are not straight lines a curl circle that form a arch.Some dots are add in it. There is some butterflies that looks like real butterflies.The picture looks so amazing that I felt I am inside it.
I can see curves,straight lines and butterfly shapes.The colour of the house is very bright and has six windows while the curve is very dark and shape like a gate.The sun and the clouds have the same outlining colours.I can see three butterflies flying around with their bright and dark colours.One butterfly has dark colours while the other two have both bright and dark colours.
ZHE XUN
FROM 3H
This picture is brightly-coloured because they have bright colour added to the picture.It also have lots of interesting picture such as butterfly,clouds,bridge and building.
The painting is beautifully done. I can see many bright colours that he has use.There are also many different shapes like, traiangle and rectangle. I like the butterflies the best! They are very pretty.
Julianne Hee(3H)
This picture has many straight lines.I like this picture .This picture is very beautiful.The butterfly in this picture looks very real.This arc in this picture looks very special to me.The building is very colourful.The sun is shining brightly. The sun looks very shiny and it is as shiny as gold.This picture is beautiful.
BY:PHUA LI XIN
PRIMARY:3
CLASS:3H
This picture has many straight lines.I like this picture .This picture is very beautiful.The butterfly in this picture looks very real.This arc in this picture looks very special to me.The building is very colourful.The sun is shining brightly. The sun looks very shiny and it is as shiny as gold.This picture is beautiful.
BY:PHUA LI XIN
PRIMARY:3
CLASS:3H
This picture is wonderful.The colours are bright.The lines are curve.I like the picture very much!
NOORUS SAYEED 3H (31)
This picture is nice.All its lines are curved.The dot are nice.The houses,bridge and butterfly are coloured beautifully.The shape of the butterfly is very dull.The houses were coloured brightly.The colour of bridge is also very dull.
Gerald Yip Wei Yong(15)3H
This picture has very good illustrations.You use the corel painter essentials 2 to draw the picture.You use the oils for outlining and you use image hose for the underground bridge if I am not wrong.There are more curve lines than straight lines making the picture look very soft and the tower looks like the famous leaning tower.Overall your picture is as beautiful as diamond.The butterflies have different colours too!The outlines are very neatly drawn.The butterflies give me a happy mood.The butterflies attract more people to see it.This is a wonderful picture that I never seen before.
From:Ching You Heng Shannon (7) 3H
This picture has a very beautiful colour.There is a building .The building has light colour.I see three beautiful butterfiy.I also see a brown gate.The gate's colour is very dark.The sun has a light orange colour.I love the picture very much.
This picture looks wonderful.The butterflies in the picture looks very real.The lines are quite curved.I think the red colour thing is the bridge.The colour used are very bright. Esther 3H
The picture is colourful and it is attractive for expedition,but why is the black butterfly upside down.What is the reddish thing.The clouds and sun are beautiful and the building is colourful.
From:Eugene Phui (36) 3H
This painting is beautifully done.I love it every much.It is very colourful and they are some beautiful colour add in it.There are some colourful butterfies in the picture.It really let me love this picture.
This picture has a very beautiful colour.There is a building .The building has light colour.I see three beautiful butterfiy.I also see a brown gate.The gate's colour is very dark.The sun has a light orange colour.I love the picture very much.
From:Chua Synn En (8) 3H
I can see very straight and curve lines.Some of the colours are dark and some are bright. There are many dots on the overhead bridge.I like the butterflies the most!They are so colourful.I also like the building.It has many colours.The sun is very beautiful and I guess that it must be very bright.The clouds look like that they are very fluffy.I like the picture very much.It must be very hard to complete the picture.
Kho Xi Yuan(20)3H
This is a beautiful picture.I can see an arch made of two curve lines.It is made out of lines,dots,bright colours and shapes.I like the butterflies the most.It look like real butterflies.The colours are bright.I think it represents our home and nature.
This painting is beautifully done.I love it every much.It is very colourful and they are some beautiful colour add in it.There are some colourful butterfies in the picture.It really let me love this picture.
Cheang Li Xin ( 6 ) 3h
The butterflies have colourful wings.The building is mixed with many colours.All the clouds are white in colour.The picture is a very excellent and is a very nice.
from
Bryan 3h
ANONYMOUS:
This picture is beautiful.The dots and the lines can be seen clearly. The butterfly look real
and beautiful.
The house has many windows but it do not have straight lines.The bat look really funny as it is not hanging on the branch.
Lines:the curves lines make the pictures soft.
Colours:the colours are not so bright for the pictures.
Dots:the dots are suitable for the sun.
Shapes:the shapes are suitable for the pictures.
Comment by: Darryl Ang {10} Class:3H
I can see that the picture has straight lines and curve lines. The overhead bridge has small pokle dots. Some of the colours are bright while some are dark. I find that this picture is colourful as there are many colours. The building has many shapes. It has squares,triangle and rectangle. The sun is shining brightly and the clouds looks very fluffy.The butterflies are flying around. It looks peaceful and calm. I think the picture will take a long time to complete it.
Meredith(3H)
can see curves,straight lines and butterfly shapes.The colour of the house is very bright and has six windows while the curve is very dark and shape like a gate.The sun and the clouds have the same outlining colours.I can see three butterflies flying around with their bright and dark colours.One butterfly has dark colours while the other two have both bright and dark colours.
From:Gladys Teiw (39) 3H
This is a picture of a flat and a bright sun.There are three butterfly flying.It has lots of colours and it is bright too.It has something bending.
NAME:Jocelyn Lim,CLASS:3H
I can see very straight and curve lines.Some of the colours are dark and some are bright. There are many dots on the overhead bridge.I like the butterflies the most!They are so colourful.I also like the building.It has many colours.The sun is very beautiful and I guess that it must be very bright.The clouds look like that they are very fluffy.I like the picture very much.It must be very hard to complete the picture.
Pearlwin(3H)
The butterflies makes me happy when I sees them because they let me things about the park. The house makes me feel I am home. The picture let me feel I am in my neighbourhood.
Lim Jun Hong
from:mirza
The clouds look fluffy.I do not know what is that big red thingy.I think it is a giant magnet.The dots on the magnet are very nice.the butterflies are very nice too.In fact,they look real.The sun tells me that it is sunny.
best inspirations,
mirza
This picture is wonderful and brightly-coloured.The butterfly make a happy mood.They look like real butterfly.The house has a bright green colour.
Ahmad Yusri 3H
DEBBIE(3H)
This picture is very colourful,and it looks real.There is a building build next to a bridge. There are some butterflies flitting above the bridge. This is the best drawing I ever had.
DEBBIE(3H)
This picture is very colourful,and it looks real.There is a building build next to a bridge. There are some butterflies flitting above the bridge. This is the best drawing I ever had.
There are three bueatyful butterflies.They makes me feel so happy.There is also a big and tall flat.It will be happy if live there.
From
Lim Si Ling
Shapes:The shapes and the colours
of the house are very soft. Outside the house is the gate . The gate's colour is very dark. It is very safe for someone to live there as the gate is scary.It will be amazing for someone to buy this wonderful house.
Comment By Su Yun 3H
I can see beautiful patterns.There are many straight and curved lines that are so beautiful.The three blue butterfiles ARE SO BUAUTI FUL
that capture my heart.The pink colour sky is very beauful.The bridge has so beautiful patterns. The clouds as an orange outline .The building has a red roof and pink and orange windows .This picture is VERY BEAUTIFUL.
LORENA CHAN LE HUI
3H
I can see a house,a gate,three butterflies,a sun and two clouds.The house is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun is bright. done by LOH JUN YI 3H[26]
I can see a house,a gate,three butterflies,a sun and two clouds.The house is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun is bright. done by LOH JUN YI 3H[26]
I can see a house,a gate,three butterflies,a sun and two clouds.The house is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun is bright. done by LOH JUN YI 3H[26]
I can see a house,a gate,three butterflies,a sun and two clouds.The house is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun is bright. done by LOH JUN YI 3H[26]
I can see a house,a gate,three butterflies,a sun and two clouds.The house is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun is bright. done by LOH JUN YI 3H[26]
I can see a house,a gate,three butterflies,a sun and two clouds.The house is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun is bright. done by LOH JUN YI 3H[26]
alaina 3d I like this place
derrick/ gabriel 3d
I can see a gate and a big house.I olso saw many nice clous on the sky and butterflies.I were love to go there if i can go there.I like that pictue.The picture is very nice.
teng wei heng 3D
the picture is quite nice.The butterfiies are upside down.The clouds are nice.The flat is colourful.The gate has flower on it.It was a beautyful.
alaina 3d I like this place
Haiqal yusof/3D
the picture is quite beautiful.It is also colourful.they have tall buildings.the butterflies are upside down.I wonder what is the red thing?
Sim chun kit class3D
I love this picture because it looks like real.The butterfly and the building are real too.I love the slide because I love red in colour.I wish that I live at a house that have swimming pool and gameboy.
Nuraziqah Bte Azman 3D
This is a wonderful picture.The house is colourful and it is green in colour.I saw some butterfly
near the cloud and above the brige.
I think it is HaPpY dAy of their life!
lin xin er 3D
This is an interesting picture.I feel happy when i see this picture.I also see a house,and the three cute butterflies flying around.
lin xin er 3D
This is an interesting picture.I feel happy when i see this picture.I also see a house,and the three cute butterflies flying around.
This is beautiful picture.I can see
a huge beuding,butterfly and a
snake.
From,
marcus
chengpong to 3d
i play my blue tac.
Elicia Ong 3D
This is a park.There is a very big gate.The house is very big.I can see many butterflies.The clouds are very white.The sun is very hot.
Khairul 3d 7/My friend change blk.My friend
Rebecca class 3D
I can see many butterfly. I feel the brihght like a under pass.
Rebecca class 3D
I can see many butterfly. I feel the brihght like a under pass.
Cynthia 3D
I can see three beautiful butterflies , a small sun, a slide
outside the house.
HAO nan & Alisha (3d)
i can see a beautiful house with some butterfly .It is very beautiful.There are a brige .It is a suny day.
Rebecca class 3D
I can see many butterfly. I feel the brihght like a under pass.
Rebecca class 3D
I can see many butterfly. I feel the brihght like a under pass.
Rebecca class 3D
I can see many butterfly. I feel the brihght like a under pass.
Tan zhao yea 3d {34} Last Saturday, my parent took me to the zoo.
Cliff and zaed 3d
There are three butterfly
Lim Yao Bin 3D
It is a sunny day where the building and butterfly live happily ever after.
jian wei 3d One sunny morning,i saw that one of the buding was so bright that i saw three buterfly flying.I was so happy that my frist saw.
Kimberly CLASS 3D
I can see a tiger,a gate,three parrot,a sun and many clouds.The sun is bright,the gate is dark,the butterflies are bright and dark and the sun.
There is a house, three butterflies and a bridge. The picture is nice and beautiful.
By:Kong Chun Lin(3D)
There is a house.there was a
bridege.There were three butterflies.
By: Zul(3D)
Chua Jia Yun 3d
This is about a building.There are beautiful building,golden clould and it is clean.I love this picture.
Diana fitriyani 3D
This is about a building.The building is very beautiful and clean.I like the building very much.I luv the building very much.
Eunice 3D
I think that the picture is ok. I think that the butterflies are pretty! I think that the building is cureved. the ciouds can draw smaller.The curve thing is a brige.
Nur Qhumairah [25]
The picture is creative.It is also colourful.i like the butterflies.The sun is bright.I also like the clouds.
Name:Ace
I can see a tall building,with six windows.The outlines were orange the cloud were also orange outline.There were two butterfly with blue colours.And one buttefly were black.
sanjeev 3d one sunny morming,i saw some buterfly flying across the house.the sun was bright.
Akid 2I
The were five lines on the house.
The lines were straight.
There were red dragon.
That house is green as grass.
There were three butterfly.
justin ong 2i
There were five lines on the house.
The lines were stright.
there was a red dragon.
That house was green in colour.
There were three purple butterflies
Zheng hong 2I
The picture is wonderful and beautiful.I think that the coiours are bright and coiourful. It is a sunny day,the butterflies are beautiful.
saw zheng yang 2I
This is a beautiful painting.There are beautiful betterflies.The building have six floors.
ying chun 2I
I think this picture is very colourful. The bridge is very red. I like this picture because it is very colourful.
Fiona 2I
This is a beautiful picture of a house and a tunnle. I think the colours are bright and nice. There is a sun in the sky now.
shawn chia 2I
The red brige beside the house has
some circle.
The buttflies in the sky are colourful.
The lines on the house are strait.
Justin teo 2i
This piture is very intresting,the brige has a catchy colour and their design is curly.The drawing of the butterflies are very beautiful and its design is very real.The house is simple but also catchy.
Justin teo 2i
This piture is very intresting,the brige has a catchy colour and their design is curly.The drawing of the butterflies are very beautiful and its design is very real.The house is simple but also catchy.
KELLY 2I
This is a nice picture. There are some beautiful butterflies. The green building to me.
Giovanni 2I
I like this picture because it is colourful.
Lek zhi yu 2I
I think your picture is very beutiful. Your butterflies are nice too. I do not know the red colour is? But I think
VIDOR 2I
I like this picture because
toh jia yee 2i
this is a red and green colour house. i like this picture because it is very coiourful. that are many different shapes.
joslin 2I
the clouds are suppose to be blue.But I still like it.there is on e tall building with yellow spots.I like the picture becauseit was too nice. the red thing i bet it is a dragon
Clariss 2I
I think this picture is very colourful.The picture makes me feel very happy.I like this picture because is very creative.
Soh Qi Hui 2I
I think this picture is very colour and beautiful.There are butterful flying around.I like this
picture because it is very colourful.
Dineshram 2i
The red thing beside the house looks like a worm.
This picture is very colurful.
The house looks like its going to
fall
I like this picture because it is
very colouful
Chloe 2I
I think this picture is beautifull because it is coiourfull.I
Janis 2I
This picture is very beautiful.
There are some yellow lines.
There are yellow, green, red, blue, black and white colours.
There are sqaure, circle, rectangle and triangle
There are some butterflies flying.
The red colour thing looks just like a bunch of flower.
There are some clouds at the sky.
This picture make me feel happy.
Lim chen yi 2I
This is a picture of a house and
slide. The house is fill with shapes.The slide have a lot of birds
Ong Yu Lin 2I
This is a picture of a house and a bridge. The house is fill with shapes. The bridge have curve line. I like this picture because
the picture is very nice.
Sharon Wong Rui Qi 2I
The lines are yellow it is nice.
The house is green.
The house is rectangle.
Eugenia ng 2I
The picture is very colourful.
The red colour is very bright.
The green is also bright too.
Reinuga 2I
`The red and black thing it look like a gint worm. And the tower is nice. The blue butterfies look pretty.
Joelle Chua 3G
This picture is beautiful. It is very colourful. The building has many colours on it. The butterflies look real.I like this picture.
Sharon,3G
This picture is very well done.I like it because it is very colourful.The butterflies are dull in colour but also very nice!There is something like a shelter and it is covered with roses! The person that stands there will be very lucky because there will be nice smell over there!
Muhammad Imanni Mikraj 3G,
Cheah Ann Ying,3G
This picture is so beautiful.the redish thing like the word (n). the block of flat is very tall it is going to reach the sky.the butterfly looks very real.i would love to draw something like that.
Liana S. del Castillo 3G
This picture looks attracting.But I don't know why are the butterflies upside-down.I think that the bridge(the red thing)is too high.The flat looks like it's about to fall.
Sabrina Lim 3G,
I like this picture because the butterflies are beautiful and it has a lot of colours.The block of building is also very colourful.I am asking why are the butterflies upside down? The block of building is very tall like a giraffe.The clouds are white in colour like a White Tiger.I like this picture very much.
Ellysha,3G
This wonderful picture is beautiful especially the butterflies. I like the yellow thick lines of the house. The butterflies are upside down but it does not matter as long as they are bright in colour.All the red dots are makes me feel happy as it is my favourite. I think if i were the one who drew this, i would add colours inside all the pictures so that it will be colourful. and for one butterfly which is coloured black, ithink if it has bright colour it will be better.About the clouds,I like it, it makes me feel excited about something.
Song Xue Qi,3G
I find this picture quite nice. The butterflies top pair of wings should be bigger than the bottem pair. The block of flat is crooked but it is okay.The shelter is made out of roses. I would like to stand under it as it will make me smell nice.
Xing Tong,3G
This picture is very beautiful.The lines of the building's not very straight but the colour of the building is fantastic coloured. the shape of the clouds are like biscuits. they look so dilicious.
Rebecca Choo,3G
This is beautiful!especially the butterflies.they look real and realistic!It would be nicer if you add the colour of the background!If I am inside, I would be as happy as a king!haha!Only if I sleep on the white fluffy clouds in the sky!i would also store my toys and homeworks in the flat until I am the richest person in the world!
Tan Yit Hien,3G
This picture is very nice.It is very beautiful too.The lines are a little slanted but the colour fits the picture well.The butterflies make the picture even nicer.I think you should add some flowers and people in the picture.
Sheri Eng,3G
This artwork is extremely nice,especially with those butterflies!Those white fluffy clouds looks so fluffy that I will have a good night sleep on them!The flat looks so HUGE that I could keep my collection of toys in there! The sun looks perfect for a picnic in the neighbourhood!I can also play in that hot sun! Great job!
Jie Yi, 3G
The flat is red and green in colour.The triange is red while the retangle is green. It has four white windows and two light brown windows.The cloulds are white and the butterfly are blue .This is a very colourful picture.
Grace,3G
This picture is very nice.
The bridge looks like many,many roses stuck together.The butterflies flying above the bridge looks beautiful.The house looks slanted.Its colors are very realistic.
The picture makes me feel comfortable.
Frederick Tang,3G
This is a fascinating picture.It has wonderful butterflies as I saw lots of colours on it.But maybe I do not like the red curved thing,but I like the roses on it.May I ask why are the butterflies upside down,I must say that thats a creative way.The dots near the sun looks like the golden sunlight.The house has straight lines and you have put in alot of shapes on the house.The bright colours on this picture make it more beautiful.
Wenn Ler,3G
This picture is a wonderful job.The butterflies is very admiring to me.The lines have straight lines and curve lines.The dots are very tiny to be seen but I can see that it is very nice.The colours already brightens up my gloomy day.The colours are well choose.All the colours are well put in the place they are suppose to be put.There are a lot of shapes to be can be seen.The butterflies seem to me like very real.You can put some purple,blue and yellow.This picture is really very good job well done.
Loo Yang Kai,3G
I like your tower very much because it is brightly painted.The butterflies look amazing as they flew upsidedown.I wondered what is the round thing is below the butterflies.
Xing Tong, 3G
The lines of the butterfly's wings are very realistic.If there are some dots in the picture it will be more beautiful.The colour of the picture is very realistic too.the shape of the elephant is like a real elephant.
Gervace,3G This picture is very beautiful.The butterflies are nice and colourful.The colours are bright and I like it.I want to thank the person who drew it...!Thank you,and I like the butterflies...
Chua Rui Ling,3G
This picture is quite nice.The lines of the building is not so straight.The butterflies are very beautiful.The outer covering colour of the gate is very pretty.The sun is beautiful too.
Lee Yuan,3G
Your painting is great,Nan Xi.You must be good in art!Your picture has artistic effects that make it look realistic.Your picture seems to show a building and an entrance to the city ,what I call that "reddish-black"thing.However,I think you should add some light blue for the sky.You should add some dots on the building to make it seem more realistic.I also think you should add more buildings&houses to make it seem more like a city.Hope you will strive more to improve your paintings!:-)(-:
Lee Yuan,3G
Your painting is great,Nan Xi.You must be good in art!Your picture has artistic effects that make it look realistic.Your picture seems to show a building and an entrance to the city ,what I call that "reddish-black"thing.However,I think you should add some light blue for the sky.You should add some dots on the building to make it seem more realistic.I also think you should add more buildings&houses to make it seem more like a city.Hope you will strive more to improve your paintings!:-)(-:
Liu junxi 3G
I still do not know why are the butterflies drawn upside-down.I think that the red red thing is a bridge.Hey!That flat reminds me of China. I like this picture.
Lim Jun Jie 3G,
It is a very nice and beautiful picture. It is a suitable colour for your roof,wall,the butterflies and the overheadbrige. But I sugested that your sky should be blue in colour. The butterflies are very creative. I really like your picture.
Imanni ,3G
This is a beautiful picture.The butterflies are nice colourful.The colours are nice and I like it.I would like to thank the person who drew it....Thank you very much.....
Chong Shen Rui, 3G
This picture is quite nice.The bright colours make it look cheerful and colourful.It makes me feel happy.But the sun is a little too small.You could also add more rays(ultraviolet rays)
Actually,the butterflies look quite real to me.To make it look more realistisc,you could put some flowers for the butterflies to rest on it.Also,why are the butterflies facing downwards instead of upwards?
The clouds seem to be floating in the sky.Is that brown colour thing a door to the building?it looks quite nice with the patterns on it.If possible,you could add some stone pebbles too.Then it will look better.
Finally,the tower.It looks quite colourful.The windows are of different colours.
I think you have done a great job in doing this picture.All the best!
Jie Bing,3G
This is a very nice and colourful
picture.The triangle roof is red and the rectangle building is green.The clouds are white.Two of the butterflies are blue and another one is black.The bridge is red and black.It also look like a giant worm.The sun is shining brightly.
Hui Ling,3G
This picture is quite nice.There are three beautiful butterfilies flying.the building is tall and has lots of colours.
Dorcas, 3G
This picture is very colourful and bright. It reminds me of many happy things. I like the butterflies and the tower. The tower is very colourful. The sun is shining brightly.
Tan Zhi Zhong,3G
This picture is very beautiful.I like it very much.Your colour is suitable for your picture.I can see a house with bright colours,a sun,two clouds,three butterflies and a gate.I like the butterflies most as it look like real.
Jonathan Foo C.Y,3G
This picture looks quite bautiful.The bright colours make it look cheerful.But the sun is a little too small.You could add some rays(ultraviolet rays).The butterflies look quite real.to make it look more realistisc,you can add some flowers for the butterflies to rest on.
The clouds seem to be floating in the sky.Is the brown thing a door to the building?It looks quite nice with the patterns on it.
You can add some pebbles on it. Then it will look nicer.
Grace,3G
This picture looks beautiful.The elephant is the biggest among all the other animals and plants.The butterflies are a beauty to me.The sun is very cute too!I love this picture.
It makes me feel happy.
angie,3f
navin/ 3f
Isaac,3F
hafiz/ 3F
kee heng bin,3f
It has very beutiful patterns.I think they should put more butterflies.The red thing should have more detail so that people could know what it is.Some windows don't have any frames.I think that the building should be white.
Jun rui,3f
I do not like the picture because the house is not very straight.
Jun rui,3f
I do not like the picture because the house is not very straight.
Darryl Tan, 3F
The painting was nice.The lines don't have holes.The colour is good.The shape of the butterfly is good too. How did you did it?
Woon Kee Chow,3F
I think Zhang Nan Xi must add some more lines,colour and shape.And more flies.And I think he needs more thing.
tan choon guan, 3f
this is a wonderffully.
this picture look nice andcooi.
it is colourflly.
i love this picture.
Isaac,3F
I like your painting.I love your clouds and your butterflies.But,the
lines of your flat is not very
strait.That is not very bad.but,your sun is the best in the picture.But,I still like your picture.How did you do it?
anita,3f
I Like mY PAINTING.
I Like a PAINTING.
I LIKE MY PAINTING.
Isaac,3F
I like your painting.I love your clouds and your butterflies.But,the
lines of your flat is not very
strait.That is not very bad.but,your sun is the best in the picture.But,I still like your picture.How did you do it?
angie,3f
The dots is very nice and i like it.The colour is very beutiful.
The shape were so nice until i like it very much.The lines are drawn in a funny manner.I like this kind of picture.
kishaini,3f
It has very beutiful patterns.I think they should put more butterflys.The red thing shuold have more detail so that we people could know what it is.Some windows don't have any fames.I think that thecolour
ShuXian,3f I like the sun.
The flat is so beauiful and colourful.
The butterfiles are so pretty.
But the bridge should have more detail. The clouds are white and nice.
muhammad shamizi,3f
This building is green and red.The butterfly wasb blue and black there are three butterrfly and there was two cloud and one sunny day. There have some red cave but it was close with the house building
SAI SURIYA , 3f
This picture is wonderfully done by this student.I can see beautiful butterflies.there are some shapes like triangle,square,rectangle and circle too.I can see clouds in the skys.This picture is very famous
SAI SURIYA , 3f
This picture is wonderfully done by this student.I can see beautiful butterflies.there are some shapes like triangle,square,rectangle and circle too.I can see clouds in the skys.This picture is very famous
ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
Doreen, 3F
I like the butterflies but the betterflies are hanging upside down in thin air ha ha.The flat must hae a different colour because I thing the flat is too bright.The brige is nice looking but it must be build very long ago.The clouds look like it is painted gold in colour if it is blue in colour I thing it will be nicer.
the end
tan zhao yang,3f
This picture is a nice picture.The coluor was beatiful.The house were big too.There was three nice butterfly near the house.There was two yellow cloud at the sky.There was too many things on this picture.There was many shape and the lines got coluor .On the sun there werefive dots too.
tan zhao yang,3f
This picture is a nice picture.The coluor was beatiful.The house were big too.There was three nice butterfly near the house.There was two yellow cloud at the sky.There was too many things on this picture.There was many shape and the lines got coluor .On the sun there werefive dots too.
Lim Shu Qi ,3f
I think the picture is beautiful.
The house is not straight enough.
THE butterfuls is nice.
THE sun is shine.
The cloud is white
HAFIZ/ 3f,
this art must change the color it
change the clour and please make thxe building cliour blue
shermaine,3F
The flat is very nice.
I like the butteriles because it is cute.
I want the cloud to be in blue colour.
The shape of the flat is very light.
The red thing like a door.
Geoffrey,3F
This picture looks nice and beautiful beacause this picture uses lines that are curly.It uses different types of shapes ,sizes and colour which make it beautiful.The butterflies are also beautiful too becaus they come in different types of shapes and sizes.The flower rainbow looks a bit beautiful.I think this picture can add a bit of colour to the background.
Geoffrey,3F
This picture looks nice and beautiful beacause this picture uses lines that are curly.It uses different types of shapes ,sizes and colour which make it beautiful.The butterflies are also beautiful too becaus they come in different types of shapes and sizes.The flower rainbow looks a bit beautiful.I think this picture can add a bit of colour to the background.
alyssa,3f
I Like The Colour Because They Are Bright.
They Are Such A beautiful Painting And I Am Sure That Eveyone Will Like It.
Tan si min,3F
I like the picture very much.
The butterfly was very nice.
The flat is very nice.
The cloud is also very nice.
The picture is very nice.
Kenny Chau Chin Kwok/3F
I think that Zhang Nan Xi must add some more coiour.I think that she must add some more flies,and the house must add some more shape,and add some more plants.I saw that some window does not have frame.
Hee Ann Ting,3F
I Like the coLour to flower and siti to eiLeen.The flower are big and ann ting.The shape to mdm Lim the flower.He has are to the flower isbig and mdm Lim.
Hee Ann Ting,3F
I Like the coLour to flower and siti to eiLeen.The flower are big and ann ting.The shape to mdm Lim the flower.He has are to the flower isbig and mdm Lim.
Wu juan siong,3f
This building were't stright enough.I was thinking Zhang nan xi want that butterfly upsidedown because it will more active.The bridge can't be so curve.It was so nice.I would like this picture.
lee wei hao,3f
This picture looks butiful.The
buterflies is the pretiest among
the town.
I can see building infront of me.
It is very butiful.Infont of the
building,it is a rainbow.
Karthik,3F
This picture is very beutiful. I think the pupil must add some more colors.I love this picture very much.The bulding is very nice.The stone is very big.
sitti nurarfazirah,3f
This is a very excelent and beautiful picture. I guess the stone in red should turn into brown or grey in colour , just like a real stone.But the cloud, neither it is white, the outline of it could be grey or black in colour.The lines are also not strait too.Maybe,he can use a rectangle line to make a straiter line.Shapes, also very nice. THANK YOU VERY MUCH HOPE U ENJOY MY COMMENTS.
shannon lim.3f
I like the picture because it is well drawn.the lines is straight.the butterfly is very beautyful.the house is very colourful too.the house roof has a very nice shape.
Claudia,3F
It is a beautiful picture.It well be more beautiful if you change the colours.The rectangle is not straight.The butterflies are nice but upside down.They well be nicer if the butterflies are not upside down.
Nurliyana,3f
The picture is very nice.
I like the butterflies.
I like the butterflies because it is beautiful and cute.
i want the cloud to be blue .
Iwant the cloud to be blue because is my favourite colour is
blue
ranjiny,3f
it has very beautiful pattern .It have sould
ranjiny,3f
it has very beautiful pattern .It have sould
Anushree,3F
I like your butterflies but they are up side down.Your building does not have enough colour.The bride does not look actractive it is dull.
Sitti Nurarfazirah,3F
This is a beautiful and an excellent picture. The butterfly in black suppose to be the same colour as the other two. The stone in red can be grey or black in colour just like a real stone. The colour of the flat can be colourful to make it more nicer.The line of the flat is very crooked and can use a rectangular strait line.The flat window has a problem.2 of them has been coloured in brown but the rest of them are'nt.
Joyce,3G
I like this picture because when I see it, I felt happy.It has showed me that the person was feeling happy when drawing the picture.The picture has a picture of a perfect day to go to the park to play.There are butterflies and a tall building with six windows.There are also white fluffy clouds too.That is why I like this picture.
this is a colourful picture.
it is a little bit too plain.
it needs to br more colourful and have more patterns.
it has too little scenery.
it needs additional colouring to look better.
This is an amazing picture to me.It looks as if it was a sunny day and is a fine day to play at a playground.I like this picture is also because it has some very beautiful butterflies.It has a tunnel that is red in colour.Its red is spotty and i like the colour.
Madeline 3G
nur nadhirah,3c
This picture is beautiful.Its house has a beautiful colour.I think art has no right or wrong answer.
erick .3c
I think this picture is colourful and very nice. The butterfly should be in colourful. I think the window should be trace as orange colour.
Hoone ling pin,3c
This picture is beautiful.The house is colourful.I thnk the butterfly is flying downwards.The clouds are big.The sun are big too.
Yasmin,3C
T
his picture looks great!!!...
ahmad syafiq,3c
The butterfly makes me happy.
The house is like my home and that make me feel surprise.
The butterfly is funny because it is flying upside down.
Tan jia ming Pr3C
I like the picture.It is very nice.
The butterfly is very beautiful.
The red thing is like a playground.
The building is very nice too.
Shao Qi, 3C
It has beautiful clouds.It is a sunday.It is very hot in the sun.It has a old houes too.
Post a Comment
<< Home