Feedback on practise 1

Dear pupils,

Its great to read so many comments from you. It is a good start. I’m impressed with some of your work, especially Tan Yarn Chyi’s comments (4A), whose effort wins a token for the month of August. He has shown effort to describe, analyse, interpret and evaluate the piece of work. Well done!

However, some of you still did not describe, analyse and interpret the artwork in your comments. You only evaluate it. That’s not good enough. You are also encouraged to comment on your friends’ comments, not just comment on the artwork alone. Do look out for next month’s task and give your best shot then.

Mrs Heng