Feedback on practise 1
Dear pupils,
Its great to read so many comments from you. It is a good start. I’m impressed with some of your work, especially Tan Yarn Chyi’s comments (4A), whose effort wins a token for the month of August. He has shown effort to describe, analyse, interpret and evaluate the piece of work. Well done!
However, some of you still did not describe, analyse and interpret the artwork in your comments. You only evaluate it. That’s not good enough. You are also encouraged to comment on your friends’ comments, not just comment on the artwork alone. Do look out for next month’s task and give your best shot then.
Mrs Heng
posted by WestGrovePrimarySchool @ 6:45 PM
20 comments
20 Comments:
Your painting is very nice.I wish to draw and paint like u.Good bye!
ashwin 3c
West Grove Primary School
Your painting is very nice.I wish to draw and paint like u.Good bye!
ashwin 3c
West Grove Primary School
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so good you.
Eka nadya From:3D
this picture is very nice. i wish to be a artist like you.your butterfly is very pretty.your brige is very nice.your buliding is nice.i like your colours.your cloud is nice.bye!bye!bye!
Jing rui 2I
This picture is very nice. you had many lines,colours and shape. I will gift you 10/10 because you had a colourful picture with butterflies.
Joyce,3G
I like this picture because when I see it, I felt happy.It has showed me that the person was feeling happy when drawing the picture.The picture has a picture of a perfect day to go to the park to play.There are butterflies and a tall building with six windows.There are also white fluffy clouds too.That is why I like this picture.
Lim Hui Ying,3C
I think these picture is very colourful.A cave is beside the house and many butterfly is above the cave.This is the most beautiful butterflies I have ever seen!
rajiv, 3c
the picture is very nice
i like the colourful lines
theform of the pictureis nice
the dots are nice
i like the shapes
hahahahahahah
This picture is nice.Ilike the elephant and the responsibility.
Chlang Hui Ling 3G
pro sia......
I think they are very creative and i hope i am like them.
Titus Lua 3H
i like the drawing and i hope i can
draw like them.
Marcus Low 3H
It is beautiful and colourful
I see a giant toad on top of a mountain.Ithink it is put there because it is protecting something very precious.Ilike the colours on the picture.It has many different tones.I like this picture because it is very Beautiful.
Lynn Tan 3H
There are black dark clouds, a village and a big hill. It is raining. I like it this artwork because it is very beautiful and creative.
Chloe Kwek 3H
I can see some nice tones! They are quite nice! I didn't knew that our school blog is so creative!
Xinyi,
3H
I think the artworks are very creative.The pictures have lots of shapes like circles,rectangles and others.The pictures have all kinds of sizes like, from big to small.The pictures have different tones and colours too.All artworks are so creative and beautiful.How I wish to draw as creative and beautiful as them!!!
I think the artworks are creative.The pictures have lots of shapes like circles,rectangles and others.The pictures have all kinds of sizes like, from big to small.The pictures have different tones and colours too.All artworks are so creative and beautiful.How I wish to draw as creative and beautiful as them!!!
Jerlyn,
3H
7:17 PM
Dear pupils,
Its great to read so many comments from you. It is a good start. I’m impressed with some of your work, especially Tan Yarn Chyi’s comments (4A), whose effort wins a token for the month of August. He has shown effort to describe, analyse, interpret and evaluate the piece of work. Well done!
However, some of you still did not describe, analyse and interpret the artwork in your comments. You only evaluate it. That’s not good enough. You are also encouraged to comment on your friends’ comments, not just comment on the artwork alone. Do look out for next month’s task and give your best shot then.
Mrs Heng
posted by WestGrovePrimarySchool at 6:45 PM on Sep 10, 2006
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